I added a vocal track. The words are from The Way of Solomon, by Rami Shapiro. This is a profound new interpretation ofThe Book of Ecclesiastes.
Emptiness! Emptiness upon emptiness!
The world is fleeting of form,
empty of permanence,
void of surety,
without certainty.
Like a breath breathed once and gone,
all things rise and fall.
Understand emptiness, and tranquility replaces anxiety.
Understand emptiness, and compassion replaces jealousy.
Understand emptiness, and you will cease to excuse suffering and begin to alleviate it.
This is a rough sketch. But like most of my work, that's often all there is.
[edit - attachment re uploaded on Nov 16m 2007]
emptiness.mp3
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Emptiness
Words by Rami Shapiro Instrumentation by Ian Sayer Vocal by Howard Moscovitz
Copyright 2006 Sayer/Moscovitz/Shapiro
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_________________ --Howard
my music and other stuff Last edited by mosc on Fri Nov 16, 2007 8:23 pm; edited 4 times in total
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 6:48 am Post subject:
I especially like the ornamentation used with the vocal--very effective. I do find it a bit 'rough' in a couple of dimensions. Perhaps less emptiness and a bit more obsessiveness might prompt you to refine it. (Sorry I couldn't resist ) _________________ The question is not whether they can talk or reason, but whether they can suffer. -- Jeremy Bentham
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Posted: Fri Dec 22, 2006 5:26 am Post subject:
Without the vocal, this music would be a nice and tranquil. The vocoded vocal -- played without vibrato -- adds both drama and expression to the music.
Great work from everyone involved with this track.
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