lost

a.vanvranken · Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 10:02 am Post subject: lost

Whats up, I felt like posting this track today. Sort of downtempo, kind of rocky, deep bass.

a.vanvranken_-_lost.mp3

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mosc · Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 10:18 am Post subject:

Oooo... This is really nice. I like it a lot. I like the way it slowly builds throughout, slorta like Ravel's Bolero. This one is a keeper...

Bravo!

paul e. · Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 10:22 am Post subject:

good track..enjoyed it

2 points..the mix...seems 'insistent'..too loud and the bass is really pushing the limits..kind of forceful in the wrong way and stressing the space, kind of over-filled

the drum sounds..specifically the kik and snare...the snare sounds hollow and phased...is it a stereo sample converted to mono ?

same withthe kik..and the kick also seem to have too much emphasis on the attack and not enough on the decay and release [perhaps a symptom of the 'insistent' bass line]

elektro80 · Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 10:34 am Post subject:

A good one. I tend to agree with Paul, but this does not attract to much attention from the truly good stuff.

Fature · Joined: Oct 03, 2004 Posts: 78 Location: United Kingdom

I like most of the tracks you post on this board and this one's no exception.

I think the drums are nice, the only problem I think you have with this track is when the other string comes in at 1:06 & 1:58 it's a bit thick, nothing some eq'ing can't sort out though.

Good one!

Fature.

Johan Zwart · Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2005 4:19 am Post subject:

a.vanvranken · Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2005 12:14 pm Post subject:

I'm glad you guys liked it!

Paul, you nailed it. Funny how you don't notice some of these things until someone points it out. I tweaked it a bit and reuploaded the track. The bass might still be too loud, though. The room I use is very inaccurate with the bass (I need some traps). The mix sounds cleaner to me.

If you all would give another listen, I'd appreciate it. I just updated the original attachment.

Johan Zwart · Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2005 12:36 pm Post subject:

Sounds better to me.
There is more detail, also to the end where it builds up to the climax at the end.

Dovdimus Prime · Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2005 11:40 am Post subject:

Not so bad mate! Does build up a good head of steam, lots of intensity at the end there.

Dovder

Dovdimus Prime · Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2005 11:44 am Post subject:

I'm now listening to 'Still', which was kicking around on my hard drive, not causing anyone any trouble.

And it's fine! It's got that end of the day, coming home on the train, tired chilledness which you seem to specialise in. Thanks!

Dovder